Six Word Story #3

“Flashlight.. there!  She’s under the debris!”

I liked how much of a story this told. You can infer that a disaster has occurred, that a search and rescue operation is underway for someone who is female, and you are left with some hope that it was successful. There’s even a bit of a cliffhanger inasmuch as you don’t know if she’s okay.  

To tell the whole story properly, you need the surrounding details, but this felt as though it delivered most of what was needed, succinctly. 


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